Opinions on the beginning of my story?

Ehhhh. Its okay. You don't have a wide range of vocabulary. Idk what is really going on. I think you only used like two adjectives. Also you did not describe the setting at all! Its likes there is no setting. Honestly its not that good and needs work. If I picked up and read this, with a begging like that, I would put it right back down. it didn't grab my attention in any way. So far is also very cliche. Sorry to be mean like this but I just wanted to tell you the truth.